oakclaw : deputy of ignisclan

[`lily]

{ N } A M E:

Oakstar

Oakclaw

{ A } G E:

35 moons

{ C } L A N:

IgnisClan.

{ R } A N K:

deputy

{ G } E N D E R:

she-cat.

{ Q } U I C K | D E S C R I P T I O N:

Lean and slightly skinny, with oddly colored eyes and frail shaped head, and briskly stranger colored pelt.


{ A } P P E A R A N C E:

('dun like pictures really. P:)

Oakstar is a very interesting she-cat. And, despite the fact that she has a rather rare coat color, I am adding a rather mary-sueish trait of two colored eyes, so I will be sure to go in detail of her appearance. Her description will be separated into four categories; body structure, scars and deformations, coloration, and facial features. If only the color of her eyes you find acceptable.

|1|

Oakstar's body structure is that of a skinny she-cat, unusual but not uncommon for cats in this clan. Her paws are outfitted with large claws that are long but not sharp, and are used for shearing and battering more than incisive cuts. The legs are long, skinny, and rather smooth, with small raised welts where previous scars raise above the streamlined fur. Her tail is long and thin, matching her overall appearance.

Moving onto her chest and back. The back is straight and lean; the ribs show, but just barely. She is a healthy cat, and it is quite obvious. Her belly is covered in an unusually large ratio to back fur mass; the amount of fur barley decreases underneath her belly. This may be an adaptation to the cold winters, or simple a genetic malfunction. Either way, it has so far server her well and has come without problems. However, if she attempts to have kits, this could be a problem, as they might have trouble finding a nipple to suckle on.

All in all, this cat is both slender and quick, and her relatively skinny body structure dose not hinder her fighting style.

|2|

The scars on Oakstar are few, but those that do exist are both obvious and extreme. As stated earlier, the scars create a raised line above the skin, similar to welts. Due to her flat coat, they are very easy to see.

_1.
The first scar is a long, narrow scar that runs from Oakstar's lower left shoulder to the upper region of her haunches. Slightly puckered, it is raised more on the shoulder than the back, and really just fades from sight at the haunches. It was given to her in one of her first battles.

_2.
The second scar is a shorter one, one that rips from her back right paw to the hip. It is not as long as the first one, but it is wider, and small gorges appear on the edge of the scar. This scar is fairly new, and while the wound is fully healed, Oakstar still limps slightly from is, expecting it to hurt.

_3.
The third and final scar is the smallest, but it is also the most noticed. Starting at the left jaw, the scar runs along jaw, riding closer to the nose. As it reaches the tip of the mussel, it lessens slightly, making almost no damage on the nose or lips. However, the scar resurfaces at the right side of the nose, continuing a diagonal sweep across the lower cheek and ending right under the eye.

The deformations of Oakstar are small and few. The tip of her left ear is missing, and farther down, a small incision is made in her ear. The tail is slightly quirked, and her back right leg walks with a slight limp, due to the recent injury.

|3|

When speaking of coloration, I must delve into the unknown. I am judging by your standards, but I am mostly unlearned in cats normal colorations, so my description may be a bit off.

Oakstar is a tortie. Her base color is rather dull, a deep mahogany brown that blends in rather well with the forest around her. The second color, a pale golden brown, is shown through stripes that run vertically along her torso and face, varying in length. While these stripes are no doubt a rather strange and weird feature, they are balanced out by her next color; a gentle, calming, dark colored tan, one that ranges from the hips to the chest, flaking both upward and downward, weaving itself both over and under the golden stripes. To finish it off, her chest and belly are covered in a deep white.

|4.|

As a last thing, Oakstar's facial features. Her face is shapely, with a long mussel and whiskers. The teeth are large, and have slightly projected over the lips. Stripes of gold wrap down the forehead, meeting with a white mussel at the nose, which is a pale pink. The eyes are stunning, each a different color. The left is a pale green, light and soft. It shifts in shades, but normally is seen in a baby green hue. The right is a stunning blue, one that is both gripping and startling. It is the more violent of the two colors, if a eye color can be violent.


{ P } E R S O N A L I T Y:

Oakstar may have not been named for her personality, but the name certainly fits her. She is a strong willed, hardy creature, one that is hard to sway, on any bit of information. For her, where to hunt is just as important as when to make a battle, and she has a hard time prioritizing things.

She is slightly paranoid, and will think a different cat has it for her every moon. This may just be a remainder of her past, when cats scorned her at every turn, but sometimes there is proof of... Other activities.

When talking, she acts with a fierce attitude, as if a mere conversation was a battle. She often seems to revel in arguing, drawing a mental trap around her opponents until they are forced to surrender to her idea. She does not often use her rank to enforce the clan, she likes to embarrass others, draw them out, force they to create their own punishments. In this way, she is considered both cruel and enlightening, evil and kind hearted.

She has not favorites, and shows no favoritism. Instead, she likes to pit cats against there flaws. She is not one for punishment, but any praise that comes from her is worthy of surprise, and it shows that she has true admiration for whichever cat she is praising.

Friend wise, she has few. Most of the clan she would consider allies, but she deems almost none of them her 'friend', and she doubts that many of them consider her there friend.


{ E } T C:

nah. :> but this is an old form I've never shown out on any other proboard site, or warrior site, roleplay wise. Just saying it's not quite new.

EDIT: OH, and if accepted I'll make a new account for her, unless I need to use this one, I wasn't sure if everyone had their own OOC accounts. But yeah. Thankie. C:

[kitt`]

Pending!

Oakstar sounds absolutely gorgeous! I am allowing multi-colored eyes, and your bio is magnificent. The only issue is that I never understood or received your reply about the Plot Canon of the Leader of IgnisClan. It's meant to be an old and frail cat that can't really tell what's going on at this point. The Leader also dies on the way to the gathering, so I was wondering if you wanted to go ahead and edit Oakstar to fit those parameters or if you were going to make her the deputy or a Warrior to be Leader after this plot. Just trying to be thorough! Otherwise, your bio is great. c:[/blockquote][/blockquote][/center][/size]

[`lily]

You know what, do you think it'd be possible for Oakstar to be Deputy for now, and until the plot is finished, or the IgnisClan's leader dies off, she would be made leader? :>

Sorry for the mix-match. But this is how I'd like it to be, if ya 'dun mind. Cx

Thankie. <3

[kitt`]

That sounds perfect, Lily! Fix her up to be like that and then you can take your place. I'm aiming for all of our plots to be short, exciting, and fast-paced, so it shouldn't take too long. :}

[`lily]

okie. <3

edited the spots.

[kitt`]

Accepted!